"give it to me, that thing, your foot's sole."
- Slave Knight Gael, after finding his true goal

Hmm, trans person here. I'm not gonna lie, that conversation at the end wasn't convincing. And I *highly* doubt that it would convince someone who was transphobic. They would just respond with some trite nonsense about chromosomes or whatever. I think it was just not a very convincing argument for why trans identities are true and valid. It's a really hard thing *TO* write out, and no one has 100% succeeded in making a perfectly compelling argument (Other than "Don't be a jerk to trans people holy hell how hard is it"), but at the very least I think it deserves a little more unpacking than was given here.

I say this with love. And in fact perhaps it makes perfect sense that the conversation played out as it did. Because he is the brother of a trans person after all, not the trans person themself. So maybe it's actually GOOD that his argument is a little half baked, because he doesn't really get it all that much either, but he loves his sister all the same.

I don't know, I guess I'm torn.

The gameplay itself was immediately compelling. A very obvious ludo-narrative harmony with the two supporting each other. It was super difficult at first but in the way that makes you want to master it which is exactly what you want. Nice job all around I'd say. I apologise if my analysis comes off as more negative than I am hoping.

:-; That was fantastic! I really really enjoyed it! Checkpoints were difficult to use at first (maybe say how to use them in the controls?). I wish it was slightly more difficult. LOADS of content and IMPECABLE animation. Upgrades were meaningful and impacted play. Great job with this.

Loved it! Really it was a lot of fun.

Only feedback is that the boss was easily cheesed (just go behind it) and without cheese it is too difficult. Also make the camera lead in front of the character rather than behind so the player knows what they are walking into.